Happy Thursday!
Today I have a special treat for you all…some may remember
that a while back I wrote a poem that became a song called ‘As I Sail To You’.
I had written it for a Flash Fiction challenge Write 4 Ten that is hosted by
Donna B McNicol. The prompt was ‘on a sailboat’ and I was surprised by what I
had written in the ten minutes after reading the prompt. I was so
surprised and feeling reckless that I asked on Twitter if someone would write some music to go with it.
I was shocked and amazed and very very ecstatic when Richard form the band A
Sea With 3 Stars did just that!
Anyway, just over a week ago I was compelled to write the
song again, but from the mermaids perspective and after doing so, I recruited
Anna Loy to perform it for me. Check her out on Fiverr. I wanted to post it
straight away but didn’t want to do so without an accompanying tale. So here it
is…
The Fisherman’s tale
Standing at the helm of the fishing boat, his gaze never leaving
the horizon, he stood tall as he watched with anticipation for a glimpse of her.
He wasn’t sure if she was real or
something his sun-addled-wind-swept-salty brain had created to make the long
days at sea bearable but he looked on regardless of his doubts.
Each morning as he boarded his fishing boat he told himself
that she couldn’t be real, he was a fool to believe that she was, wasn’t he? Each evening as he alighted his fishing boat
he told himself that she was the only thing in his life that was real, wasn’t she?
The moment she appeared in sight all his senses were ignited.
Blinking into the sunlight as her beauty shone out to him, her long golden hair
and eyes of blue, he could only watch as she weaved and writhed effortlessly
through the water towards him. He was
mesmerised as she sang out to him, at first they had been tales of the sea, but
now it was a song for him and as each note floated to him his heart swelled
with love. How he longed to touch, to taste, to smell her, to hold her in his
arms and feel the warmth of her body. Hypnotised by her beauty and her song he
longed to join her in the ocean.
His family had always been fishermen, his father, his
grandfather, his great grandfather and every generation before that and tales
had been told to wide eyed boys of escapades on the waves, of sea monsters, of
men gone mad from sunstroke and of mermaids and sirens who would lure fisherman
to their death.
Every day as he sailed to her he ignored all he knew, he
would fish and she would sing and it was as if their souls were joined as one,
but each evening as the sun set he would return to land, fighting the urge to
dive deep into the cool blue sea for eternal happiness with her. He had his own
sons to raise and to teach and to warn of such things and he couldn’t leave
them without a father. His father, his grandfather, his great grandfather and
every generation before that had always returned home each night, and each had
left her on the horizon as she sang to them.
So here they are both songs! Firstly, the original as performed by Richard, which the more I listen to it the more I think his voice matches it well, the very laid back calmness that I feel my fisherman has with a hint of something more.
As I sail to you
Early in the morning, through the wind and the rain
My body is beaten by nature, without any refrain
I battle the seas, with my sails and my net
Just to get close to you at the place that we met
With rhythm and sway
On the cool of the blue
She creaks and she croaks
As I sail to you
With your long golden hair and a tail of green
Seashells can’t hide what I’ve already seen
You sing like an angel from heavens above
As the wind carries it to me, my heart fills with love
With rhythm and sway
On the cool of the blue
She creaks and she croaks
As I sail to you
As the night draws to a close and a chill fills the air
I wonder aloud, if you really were there
With my boat laden with fish after a day out at sea
I remember the song that you once sang to me.
I asked Anna to perform the song from the mermaids perspective and I think she has done this well.
So her song to him….this was the easiest way for me to do it, so please click on the link!
Link >>>> As I Swim To You
Link >>>> As I Swim To You
As I swim to you
Early in the
morning as the waves crash against the shore
I am carried by
the current to the same place as before
I battle my mind
it’s not the way it should be
But whenever I’m
with you my heart is set free
With rhythm and
sway
In the cool of the
blue
I weave and I
writhe
As I swim to you
With your ship and
your legs, and your desire for me
I will never
believe those who say it can’t be
I sing from my
heart so you know that it’s true
As the wind
carries my love, directly to you
With rhythm and
sway
In the cool of the
blue
I weave and I
writhe
As I swim to you
With rhythm and
sway
In the cool of the
blue
I weave and I
writhe
As I swim to you
As the night draws
to a close and I know you must leave
I fade into the
ocean as I struggle to breathe
I am lost without
you and I wave you goodnight
Returning to greet
you with the first morning light
With rhythm and
sway
In the cool of the
blue
I weave and I
writhe
As I swim to you
With rhythm and
sway
In the cool of the
blue
I weave and I
writhe
As I swim to you
I hope you like them both and feedback/comments welcomed below :)
I love the poems and the story! :)
ReplyDeleteUnfortunately, I couldn't get the video to play. It just went to a back screen and sat there. :(
~Becky
Thanks Becky! Thats odd, as it works for me.....hmmm...here is a direct link...http://youtu.be/yEfG6dHLfBc and don't forget to click on the link to hear Anna. :)
DeleteIt's okay. I came back and tried later and it worked fine. I loved both songs! So beautiful! And Anna's voice, as always is so lovely! Richard's voice was perfect for the fisherman's part of the song too. :)
DeleteYou are making me want to write song lyrics! (something I haven't done since I was a teenager.)
DO IT!!!!! :)
DeleteThis is fab!!! First off great story and lyrics.
ReplyDeleteRichard is perfect for the fisherman, just loved his voice, matched the lyrics really well. Anna as the mermaid is also brilliant, her voice is so good and the fact that they both are singing of love and loss, just wonderful.
This is a really great bit of work, you should be very proud and hats off to the singers X
Thanks Laura, glad it turned out well and that you like it. They managed to capture the longing and the never-be .
DeleteCongratulations Kate. Great lyrics, nice tunes, the voices were perfect, as was the story.
ReplyDeleteThanks Hap. They did a good job. Of course it wouldn't have been possible without Richard!
DeleteAll of this gave me goosebumps...your writing, poetry and the two singers...wonderful...
ReplyDeleteReally drawn into the tale of love and the constant turning tide of loss. Gorgeous Kate!
Thank you Lisa, the ebb and flow of passion and duty :)
DeleteI've always wanted to write a song, but I'm about as musically gifted as Simon Cowell. You, on the other hand, have created something great. Well done to you and to Richard for brining this to life.
ReplyDeleteI am not musical either. You could do it. I am sure when Mechanical Addman takes over the world there will need to be battle songs :D
DeleteThis was a wonderful story, a wonderful poem, and two great songs. Our post today was most definitely not about you, btw, because this displays real talent.
ReplyDeleteAs for me, I'm more musical than I am poetic, but I don't think I want to put any of our comic strips or novels to music. That actually sounds pretty terrible. :)
After reading your blog I came back here to check out my poem page and admittedly a couple I am eehing over (not sure that's a word but should be accompanied with a grimace)but I think its hard to judge yourself. One of the last poems I wrote I purposely did so in a storylike way because I kept reading that it shouldnt rhyme, and it shouldnt be alliterative, and it shouldnt be a lot of things! In the end, its how i handle stress, so it cant be all bad. Thanks for your lovely comment about the tale above, I really appreciate it and am glad you liked it.
DeleteOh, I dont know - you could play music like they used to for silent movies for a comic strip?