23 Jan 2013

55 word challenge

This is my contribution to the 55 word challenge, I used the image below as a prompt.


A screech rings out as metal grates metal
a searing pain in her head as the train stops
squinting through clouded eyes to see the hefty conductor approach
turning sharply with narrowed eyes he speaks
she hears a blur
he evicts her and once again she is forced to roam
by foot 
through the wasteland.

4 comments:

  1. You took a few words and turned them into a graphic novel!!..Well done you!!..Loved it!!...:)

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    1. Thanks :) Now, if only I could draw! haha

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