Hello,
This was last weeks prompt of limitless - you don't have to use the word and I have vaguely attempted to imply that something is limitless within this piece, I have also written a ridiculously long fifth sentence! I hope you can make allowances for me and enjoy this piece. Check out the others here.
This was last weeks prompt of limitless - you don't have to use the word and I have vaguely attempted to imply that something is limitless within this piece, I have also written a ridiculously long fifth sentence! I hope you can make allowances for me and enjoy this piece. Check out the others here.
Limitless
She stood there smiling up at him inanely in an attempt
to look riveted by his current topic of conversation; the lifespan of diesel
engines (a topic that had no end it seemed), it was her fifth date this week
and surprisingly not the most boring.
Admittedly, she could have made more of an effort in
leading the conversation but she hadn’t yet felt a connection with any of them
and hoped her non-participation would make them end the date sooner but she had
no such luck!
She had been staring at him in feigned interest for far
too long and when she blinked her eyes began to water causing him to look over and
notice her for a moment, he frowned a little and paused mid-sentence as if he
was going to say something, she looked back at him and raised an eyebrow in
anticipation but he just resumed the conversation.
She was glad to be home, flung of her shoes and collapsed
into the sofa, she grabbed the TV remote and switched on to see what her Sky
box had recorded in her absence.
“Alright mate, it was awful, I will never go on a date you
set me up on again man, that woman was strange, she stood there gawping at me
and not saying anything, I could see she wasn’t listening so I started talking
about diesel engines, and I swear to god I think she was moved by it, she had a
tear in her eye and everything!”
Leave a comment if you are so inclined! :) (fingers crossed you are)
love it. Final sentence made me laugh out loud.
ReplyDeleteThanks :) Glad I made you laugh!
DeleteSocial engagement!
ReplyDeleteYou really know the ropes here.
Sometimes it is easier to relate to a pet! :)
I enjoyed and felt for your characters, they try hard
but no one really connected! Is that thing the standard
of the time? Selfishness? :)
Thank you, for a very good tale.
Od Liam
Thank you Od Liam, welcome too! I think it leans more towards that way than previously sadly.
DeleteYou've got a good eye (ear? no... I'll stick with eye) for comedy.
ReplyDeleteIt's my go to in every situation! Also have written quite sad pieces thus week & wanted some light relief.
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