21 Jun 2013

Charred

I've been at it again!

Charred

Charred with the ashes of forgotten dreams
Dreams of revenge and retribution combined
Combined to deliver an exacting punishment
Punishment that will never match the intensity
The intensity of the anguish and heartbreak
Heartbreak that will never heal, an infinite wound
Wound up so tight with joy and expectation of what
Of what will be, what could be, what may be, hope
Hope and dreams throbbing and charred.
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  1. Unknown21 June 2013 at 14:11

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  2. Unknown21 June 2013 at 14:12

    Wow, Marjie - powerful!

    (spelled your name right this time :) )

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  3. kate n21 June 2013 at 15:24

    For some reason your comments made me start singing the Spice Girls....when two become one! Thanks for commenting :) Made my day!

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  4. Keebles21 June 2013 at 15:53

    Wow...mornin to you too! But seriously, this one really hits close to home! You been raiding my brain for emotions again or do my daddy issues waft across the pond?

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    1. kate n21 June 2013 at 21:00

      Morning! I'm glad you could relate. No thought theft :) must come from sharing a pea pod.

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  5. Anonymous23 June 2013 at 14:51

    Brilliant ..... love it...... wound & wound, very clever.xx

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