I was inspired today to write this poem...
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I breathe
Whilst I wait I breathe
I hear sounds I never did
I see sights I never knew
I no longer touch I cling
I savour every morsel
I love completely and all at once
I laugh loudest
I never cry I only sob
Wretched am I
The wait ends I breathe my last
I like this. Nice one.
ReplyDeleteThank you Michael :)
DeleteLovely Kate! That last line is a bit of a bummer, but I like it too! Well done!
ReplyDeleteSorry about that Hap! lol I'm glad you liked it and thank you for such kind remarks.
DeleteWoah, that's it, I'm giving up breathing!
ReplyDeleteAwesome poem :)
Don't do it! I would miss your blog posts :) I know...truly selfish reasons. Thanks though :)
DeleteBeautiful.
ReplyDeleteThanks Emrys! Hope you're well and that albums almost done...some of us (naming no names - ME!) are growing impatient...lol!
DeleteIt's going well. I spent another day in the studio today. Keep the writing coming. I read it all even if I don't post!
DeleteThat means an incredible amount to me and thank you for still reading :)
DeleteI love the tortured calm which enfolds this piece. The reader can feel the relief of a weight being removed to be replaced by a comforting yet lamentable blanket of acceptance. I REALLY like this Kate!!!....Well done you.....:) x
ReplyDeletethanks Lynn - I am a tortured soul! lol x
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