The prompt I used:
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My 55 word story...
She tried the handle, it turned but wouldn't open, and she began frantically yanking the door. Every time she did so the walls of the house moved inwards and the roof lowered. What had started as a large barn and shelter from the rain was now a small shack that threatened to be her coffin.
Pretty neat. I like the idea of getting a thought/feeling across to your reader in such few words. And you did it well. Very claustrophobic of you. :)
ReplyDeletethanks, what would I do without your comments? thank you
DeleteThis is so well expressed ... loved the story !!!
ReplyDeleteThank you, I appreciate that.
DeleteScary stuff! And dead cool to get so much out of 55 words.
ReplyDeletethanks :)
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