Sometimes life drags you down, you do crazy stuff, I write poems...
Let me count them
Let me count
Let me
How many things
How many
How
Are they bad
Are they
Are
You see flaws
You see
You
Must you change
Must you
Must
Will you change
Will you
Will
Its not easy
Its not
Its
You have choices
You have
You
Others will not help
Others will not
Others will
Life is hard
Life is
Life
There is hope
There is
There
You can win
You can
You
I LOVE this...love it love it love it!! See how I love it?...You have managed to capture an echoed thought!...Absolutely bum scratchingly brilliant!...
ReplyDeleteThanks Lynn, I am glad somebody liked it :D and someones as marvellously fabulously brilliant as your good self! I appreciate you taking the time to comment, spring/summer is a busy time for people xx
DeleteSharp and eloquent, great shape and holds the attention. Well done :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks Annalisa.
DeleteWell I did win on the Ato Z I finished it. Nice poem. Passingthrough on my roadtrip
ReplyDeleteI did the A to Z challenge last year successfully :) not enough hours in the day this year unfortunately. Congratulations to you though its not easy.
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