Hello!
I hope you you all are well. Last night I posted the latest installment of Girls Best Friend part 11 & part 12. It was very late and I apologise for that , but better late than never, hey?
As I laid my head on the pillow and started to dream before slumber a poem appeared in my head and I thought about ignoring it but it insisted and so I wrote it down.
Here it is....
I hope you you all are well. Last night I posted the latest installment of Girls Best Friend part 11 & part 12. It was very late and I apologise for that , but better late than never, hey?
As I laid my head on the pillow and started to dream before slumber a poem appeared in my head and I thought about ignoring it but it insisted and so I wrote it down.
Here it is....
Trust
Implicitly
Internally
Moulded to your soul
Truth
Honesty
Honourably
Making up your whole
Faith
Believing
Belonging
Owning as you grow
Love
Regaling
Romancing
Serenading all to show
Life
Learning
Lamenting
Ending as it begun; one breath.
Feel free to leave any feedback in the comments!
Love it! The last stanza is most impactive!...Well done you!!...
ReplyDeleteOOh! I have an impaction...lol! Thanks Lynn.
Deleteok, so you are still creating even in your sleep.Really thought provoking
ReplyDeleteYep, I'm full of it! Creativity that is ;)
DeleteI like that very much. The final two stanzas really impact me, as I love late in life, with the expectation that I don't have long to make her happy. It's frustrating, yet reaffirming. Well done Kate.
ReplyDeleteI am sure you will be fine Hap. Thank you. :)
DeleteI agree with all the comments. Great poem. Great final words. (I won't mention that it looks like a pile of traffic cones.)
ReplyDeletewitches hats! :P But thanks Emrys, I'm pleased to see you still pop by even with your crazy mad musical magic thats occurring!
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