17 Jun 2012

The Visit

The Visit

Dreaming
Hoping
Planning 
Smiling

Waiting
Listening
Knowing
Smiling

Moving
Opening
Hugging
Smiling

Playing
Singing
Laughing
Smiling

Eating
Drinking
Sharing
Smiling

Kissing
Waving
Leaving
Gone.
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6 comments:

  1. Rebecca Alexander17 June 2012 at 09:09

    This is lovely! Who would have thought that a poem could be pared down to just verbs, but it really works and evokes a happy visit. Lovely.

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  2. RHYTHM AND RHYME17 June 2012 at 11:46

    Excellent Kate, wonderful to read.

    Yvonne.

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  3. kate n18 June 2012 at 08:19

    Thank You Yvonne, that is kind of you to say.

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  4. Anonymous20 June 2012 at 11:49

    this is lovely, well written, less words provoking more thought.

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    1. kate n20 June 2012 at 11:52

      Inspired by my nieces visit on Saturday!

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  5. kate n20 June 2012 at 11:51

    Thanks

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