15 Aug 2013

I breathe...

I was inspired today to write this poem...

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 I breathe

Whilst I wait I breathe

I hear sounds I never did
I see sights I never knew
I no longer touch I cling

I savour every morsel

I love completely and all at once
I laugh loudest
I never cry I only sob
Wretched am I

The wait ends I breathe my last
 

12 comments:

  1. Lovely Kate! That last line is a bit of a bummer, but I like it too! Well done!

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    1. Sorry about that Hap! lol I'm glad you liked it and thank you for such kind remarks.

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  2. Woah, that's it, I'm giving up breathing!

    Awesome poem :)

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    1. Don't do it! I would miss your blog posts :) I know...truly selfish reasons. Thanks though :)

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    1. Thanks Emrys! Hope you're well and that albums almost done...some of us (naming no names - ME!) are growing impatient...lol!

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    2. It's going well. I spent another day in the studio today. Keep the writing coming. I read it all even if I don't post!

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    3. That means an incredible amount to me and thank you for still reading :)

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  4. I love the tortured calm which enfolds this piece. The reader can feel the relief of a weight being removed to be replaced by a comforting yet lamentable blanket of acceptance. I REALLY like this Kate!!!....Well done you.....:) x

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    1. thanks Lynn - I am a tortured soul! lol x

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