23 May 2013

Feeling bleugh...

Sometimes life drags you down, you do crazy stuff, I write poems...

Let me count them
Let me count
Let me

                                How many things
                                How many
                                How
                               
                                                Are they bad
                                                Are they
                                                Are
                                               
                                                                You see flaws
                                                                You see
                                                                You

Must you change
Must you
Must

                                Will you change
                                Will you
                                Will

                                                Its not easy
                                                Its not
                                                Its
                                               
                                                                You have choices
                                                                You have
                                                                You

Others will not help
Others will not
Others will

                                Life is hard
                                Life is
                                Life

                                                There is hope
                                                There is
                                                There
                               
                                                                You can win
                                                                You can
                                                                You



                                                               
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6 comments:

  1. Lynn Gerrard25 May 2013 at 12:17

    I LOVE this...love it love it love it!! See how I love it?...You have managed to capture an echoed thought!...Absolutely bum scratchingly brilliant!...

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    1. kate n25 May 2013 at 12:37

      Thanks Lynn, I am glad somebody liked it :D and someones as marvellously fabulously brilliant as your good self! I appreciate you taking the time to comment, spring/summer is a busy time for people xx

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  2. Annalisa Crawford26 May 2013 at 13:50

    Sharp and eloquent, great shape and holds the attention. Well done :-)

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  3. Billy Blue Eyes31 May 2013 at 10:00

    Well I did win on the Ato Z I finished it. Nice poem. Passingthrough on my roadtrip

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    1. kate n3 June 2013 at 14:46

      I did the A to Z challenge last year successfully :) not enough hours in the day this year unfortunately. Congratulations to you though its not easy.

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