17 Jun 2012

The Visit

The Visit

Dreaming
Hoping
Planning 
Smiling

Waiting
Listening
Knowing
Smiling

Moving
Opening
Hugging
Smiling

Playing
Singing
Laughing
Smiling

Eating
Drinking
Sharing
Smiling

Kissing
Waving
Leaving
Gone.

8 comments:

  1. This is lovely! Who would have thought that a poem could be pared down to just verbs, but it really works and evokes a happy visit. Lovely.

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  2. Excellent Kate, wonderful to read.

    Yvonne.

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  3. Thank You Yvonne, that is kind of you to say.

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  4. this is lovely, well written, less words provoking more thought.

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    1. Inspired by my nieces visit on Saturday!

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